Thursday, May 20, 2010

Is this a poem? I want to cry like avatar

I want to cry, like Avatar
Aaaaaaaa
Aaaaarrrrrrrrr
Aaarrrrggggggghhhhhhhh

The cry is so loud, even you can hear from afar
I am blue, with clothes on
I also wearing neckless made from rocks and stones
And I am crying
Like the avatars, they did it under the tree, oops!
But I don’t do things like that, especially under the tree
We should fine a comfortable space
Oh shut up, I am talking about a bed

And I feel like crying again, like avatar
Oh should I put ‘a’ or ‘the’ infront?
I have no idea
Because my grammer is not even better
Compared to a cricket, playing in the open air

Aaaaaaaa
Aaaaarrrrrrrrr
Aaarrrrggggggghhhhhhhh

Why do I cry? Why must I cry?
Nothing. I just feel like crying
Like the avatar lady
So thin tall and blue
Yet so brave
And the cries was unique
So overwhelming
I want to do the same

Aaaaaaaa
Aaaaarrrrrrrrr
Aaarrrrggggggghhhhhhhh

Semua coretan adalah hakmilik Mak Su dan tidak boleh diulangsiar oleh sesiapa pun tanpa keizinan dari Mak Su.

© 2010 Hakcipta Terpelihara.

11 comments:

PnConfused said...

nih poem dgn sound effect maksu....



heng yek?? ngape ekkk??? :P

shasha said...

mak su...kita pun nak nangis gak nih! sedih sgt2...

mamarempit said...

saya terus sangap tk sudah2.....ampun....tk paham....

rase nk nangessss ajer....

(tk de kene mengena ngn n3 maksu)

achik said...

nape mak su?

Shukri Mohd Ali said...

uh...feel like crying inside =D

makdara terdiva said...

ish..nape ni ni mak su?????
sedih ke?

tapi konpius yg bunyi arr arrr arrr tu.. :P

nabilah_2908 said...

la...maksu..ok ke ni..?
tension dgn kerja ke..? huhu..

sabar eh...maksu kan kuat...macam lady avatar tu..dh..xmo nagis2.. ;)

jom ke APA KATA HATI pulak,
CARA MELETAKKAN LINK BERSAMA KOMEN ANDA

Mak Su said...

saja je, nak merepek cara berseni, wakakaka....

itu sound effect, bunyi aaaaaa aaaaaa, kan heroin avatar nangis macam tu.....

Cik Pah said...

aiyoohh.. apakah bunyi arr arr itu?

Chik chuMeLL said...

xmo nangis mak su...tak comey..hehehe..memang kena ade sound effect camtu ye :D

OliveAnna said...

wakakkaka..tak dapek bayang kan maksu wat aksi2 ituh... hahahahhaa